Comments on: Shift http://blackedge.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/23/ Write....write....write Sun, 19 Jul 2009 03:25:31 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: jeraldsjackson http://blackedge.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/23/#comment-15 jeraldsjackson Sun, 12 Jul 2009 02:22:58 +0000 http://blackedge.wordpress.com/?p=23#comment-15 lol, touche. You are correct. It's just funny how some things come together so much better and some weeks are like this. But thank you so much for the compliment, you are too kind! lol, touche. You are correct. It’s just funny how some things come together so much better and some weeks are like this.

But thank you so much for the compliment, you are too kind!

]]> By: Ellen http://blackedge.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/23/#comment-14 Ellen Sun, 12 Jul 2009 01:28:05 +0000 http://blackedge.wordpress.com/?p=23#comment-14 Isn't that kind of the whole point? Writing something up and not worrying about whether it's good or not? I wasn't happy with my own entry *at all*, but I stuck it up because it made me think criticially about why I didn't like it and what I could do to improve. The idea is to free yourself, right? Lol. And I like it, by the way. So there's at least one fan! Isn’t that kind of the whole point? Writing something up and not worrying about whether it’s good or not? I wasn’t happy with my own entry *at all*, but I stuck it up because it made me think criticially about why I didn’t like it and what I could do to improve. The idea is to free yourself, right? Lol.

And I like it, by the way. So there’s at least one fan!

]]> By: jeraldsjackson http://blackedge.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/23/#comment-13 jeraldsjackson Sun, 12 Jul 2009 01:20:27 +0000 http://blackedge.wordpress.com/?p=23#comment-13 I know the rules say no editing, but after re-reading this today, I am a bit dismayed at a number of errors. I am also a bit displeased with the overall storyline. You can definately tell I was feeling my way with this one, pushing for a story that wasn't quite there. I know the rules say no editing, but after re-reading this today, I am a bit dismayed at a number of errors. I am also a bit displeased with the overall storyline. You can definately tell I was feeling my way with this one, pushing for a story that wasn’t quite there.

]]> By: Ellen http://blackedge.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/23/#comment-12 Ellen Sun, 12 Jul 2009 00:05:59 +0000 http://blackedge.wordpress.com/?p=23#comment-12 Just to let you know, I'm themockturtle over at insanejournal. Thanks for your review! x Just to let you know, I’m themockturtle over at insanejournal. Thanks for your review! x

]]> By: Ellen http://blackedge.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/23/#comment-11 Ellen Sat, 11 Jul 2009 12:52:59 +0000 http://blackedge.wordpress.com/?p=23#comment-11 I really liked the idea behind this! And the ending was brief but it worked really well in the context and gave a nice sort of "zoom out" feeling to the story. The style of writing is very fluid too. Ellen I really liked the idea behind this! And the ending was brief but it worked really well in the context and gave a nice sort of “zoom out” feeling to the story. The style of writing is very fluid too.

Ellen

]]> By: Emmalyn http://blackedge.wordpress.com/2009/07/11/23/#comment-10 Emmalyn Sat, 11 Jul 2009 03:20:19 +0000 http://blackedge.wordpress.com/?p=23#comment-10 It sounded like a relatively easy challenge topic, but I too, found it hard to get a good ballance of misunderstanding, understandability, and ultimate understanding (though in truth, the task didn't say the misunderstanding had to be resolved... An excellent story, none-the-less. It sounded like a relatively easy challenge topic, but I too, found it hard to get a good ballance of misunderstanding, understandability, and ultimate understanding (though in truth, the task didn’t say the misunderstanding had to be resolved… An excellent story, none-the-less.

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